The Gathering Shadows, Ch2 Pt2The Gathering Shadows, Chapter 2, Part 2The Gathering Shadows, Ch2 Pt2
9:12 PM, November 8th, 2070 AD
Finally able to stop and rest, Raze pondered the flurry of activity that had gotten him to this point. Now he stood, hugging himself and shivering slightly on the cold rooftop. The steady clipping wind sought to steal his body heat, and in this case it was winning. Raze watched with dismay, momentarily enraptured by the puffs of condensation that floated away with each breath, only to be snatched up by a gust of wind and smeared across the darkening sky. The smog-induced sunset had already faded, and even now the last of the warmth-giving
Punctuating Dialogue: A GuideStandard Punctuation: DialoguePunctuating Dialogue: A Guide
Sometimes we read dialogue so often, punctuated in so many different ways, that we either forget what we've learned (if that was anything memorable to begin with) or we rely on instinct to guide us. A common example of this can be seen in the opening dialogue of darksouldream's piece, Bobby:
‘No,’ replied Cindy `I think his sister Becky is staying with her, but she keeps muttering about parents out living children. The doctors been keeping her pretty sedated.’
Most Americans will cringe at this. Why? Well, double quotation mar
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>>>/Boot-up Complete... [Welcome to Year Infinity, Where time keeps on going.]
Are you the type who thinks of Me, I'm not. what not is Truth, Myself, I can never believe, 43 43 54 56 Burned onto CCTV.
>>>/function error...
?Could you Believe, Staring at the greyscape, that humanity lost You. Ours is freedom, What's your motive?
"The fucking world is bearing your disease!"
--- Tear through Radio Waves, &n
He Looked At The Painting‘Oh my God, what have I done?’ shouted Jaggery, staggering out of the anteroom and into the place where he’d…” Viri paused. His streamlined brows met as he consentrated, staring hard at the book. “That doesn’t make any sense, ‘the place where he’d been painting only moments ago.’ He wasn’t doing anything of the sort.” “I think it might just be a typo,” Aaron suggested. “It makes sense. It could have been ‘the place where he’d been looking at the paintings only moments ago.’ Right?” “Could be,” Viri said, thinking about it.He Looked At The Painting
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